Thursday, March 22, 2007

I Live In You. Comments

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My love dwells in your heart
Like a baby in the womb
Of surrogate mother,
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Ankur Shrivastava
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Preeti - is here! 24 April 2007

The reference to the baby in the womb of a surrogate mother is definitely the high point. And i sir agree with Lal sir and think that rhyme wasn't needed! Preets

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Lal Parameswar 22 March 2007

Nice but why can't you write it in a rhyming way? If this is your style, then kudos...

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