Friday, April 19, 2019

I Live In Two Worlds Comments

Rating: 5.0

How nice is it to live in two worlds!
Sweeter is the world that is within me,
Nobody is here to shoot the birds,
Put my eyes into your eyes and see,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 April 2019

YOU NEED NO ADORATION READING YOUR POETRY HAS BECOME A FASHION SEE HOW QUICKLY UR RISING AS POET ME IS FALLING JA g go c 15 and 16

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Savita Tyagi 25 April 2019

Beautiful and thought provoking poem. This inner cage that we want to escape...we can not break only to shake....so tempting is its lasting peace yet far beyond our reach. So gratifying to read you after a long time.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 April 2019

A brilliant and thought provoking write. Human beings create their own world or worlds. that suit them. A world that is embedded with love and peace is safe, .secured and cannot be broken. Beautifully crafted and well conveyed write.

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Konab Ghumman 21 April 2019

I cannot escape still I escape from it, I have started living in two worlds, Is the cage misfit or I am misfit? Could You? What I did for the birds! beautiful thoughts.

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Khalida Bano Ali 21 April 2019

A question that has no reply, a poem of thoughts.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 April 2019

A cage for humans unsafe, unsecured, Doors I can't break, I can only shake. Where love is assured and peace insured! Such a cage for humans why He didn't make! Brilliant expression! An excellent work....10

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