I Live, I Die, I Burn, I Drown Comments

An insightful poem nicely put together with conviction

The problem seems to schizophrenia, double personality can be corrected by following non-attachment to worldly things! Nice poem to read!

Nice write-up

The intricacies of life. A well expressed poem.

Due to oxymoronic nature of life, it seems romantic too due to alternate change of joy sorrow without one in steady state! Nice composition to read about the truth in life!

I find my pain beginning all over once again///greatly written the poem; outstanding the title -I Live, I Die, I Burn, I Drown" where hidden the all mystery of life and recycling!

Then when I feel my joys certain And my hour of greatest delight arrived I find my pain beginning all over once again. a very fine poem. tony

bad poem very bad is very very poor poem and sucks

Contrasts of life experience, contrariety of emotions, feelings and understandings, under different circumstances have been so nicely described in this poem. Loved reading it.

Once chill and cold! ! ! ! But to hold on to the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Tinitious poem. Niche lively.

A true picture of contradictions in life with alternate incoming of joy and grief and taking the life in it's strides, being the only solution. A great life song.

Then when I feel my joys certain And my hour of greatest delight arrived I find my pain beginning all over once again. Marvelous writing

ah, yes, the agonies of love. with elizabethan flavor this could have been a soliloquy of juliet in shakespeare's play. -gk

A moving poem by Delmira Agustini.............................

I live, I die, I burn, I drown I endure at once chill and cold Life is at once too soft and too hard I have sore troubles mingled with joys.. the very first stanza attracted me. a very fine poem. tony

This was stolen from a french poet

This is life. Joy and sorrow, pain and happiness go hand in hand. You expect one and get the other. This makes life very interesting to live. Beautiful poem. Enjoyed.10++++++

Happiness and grief, delight and pain, love's inconstancies the poet has experienced in life. Peace be to her soul and her dreaming upward looks.