I listen to the rain
it has a tale to tell
when I think all is lost
it whispers all is well
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I would drop and in 6th verse after a fulstop, in 7th and 13th verse too.A very robust and strong piece of poetical writting, Barry.
Rain is a gift...poets know it well. I like the way the poem unfolds...beautiful poem!
Excellent. So beautifully written. The connection between poet n nature is very strong. Your poem proves that. Well-conceived n well-crafted.10
Thank you Nosheen. I appreciate your comments.