Friday, July 1, 2016

I Listen To The Rain Comments

Rating: 4.8

I listen to the rain
it has a tale to tell
when I think all is lost
it whispers all is well
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 04 July 2016

Excellent. So beautifully written. The connection between poet n nature is very strong. Your poem proves that. Well-conceived n well-crafted.10

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Barry Middleton 04 July 2016

Thank you Nosheen. I appreciate your comments.

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Dimitrios Galanis 01 July 2016

I would drop and in 6th verse after a fulstop, in 7th and 13th verse too.A very robust and strong piece of poetical writting, Barry.

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Barry Middleton 01 July 2016

Thank you. If I changed it, it wouldn't rhyme.

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Leloudia Migdali 01 July 2016

Rain is a gift...poets know it well. I like the way the poem unfolds...beautiful poem!

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Barry Middleton 01 July 2016

Thank you so much for the comment.

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