Sunday, May 20, 2007

I Like The Way She Moves Comments

Rating: 3.1

She rises
Neptune’s daughter from the deep
warming to the movements of a symphony
for an instant poised in Boticellian style
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Ben Gieske
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Wow! Ben. This is stunning work. I think you should invite members here to read this brilliant poem. It is mystical, enchanting, vivid with imagery, soaked with color and musicality as well. The title evokes something deep within my soul and I can see why it has been published. This is my kind of poetry. 10 Karin Anderson

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wow, it's lovely and such a poet you are.

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Chinga Dera 20 May 2007

Nicely done. Excellent imagery.

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