Thursday, August 23, 2018

I Like My Old Age To Be Mellow Comments

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Thou art to soul as sleep is to my strife,
The cheeks look when no more rosy nor full,
Lips no more red, knees busy nor supple,
The flesh when falters, wrinkles be when rife,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 August 2018

Such a well penned sonnet, Aniruddha....10+++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 August 2018

Thank you Bernard. It is encouraging to find a reader who has liked my poem. Thanks indeed.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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