As I was leaving she hugged me
Kissed me then told me she loved me
Not really sure how to reply
My mouth responded with an “I Love You Too”
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I can totally relate to this poem thankyou so much for sharing this wonderful piece
I have to say that its a great heart-felt poem but what i dont get is if someone in that kind of situation where someone is in love someone but that person doesn't love them is it fair to make them think that you do sure maybe in time you can grow to love that person but it doen't mean you will fall in love with them. is it fair to make the think you feel the same way and end up hurting that person later or letting them go so can be with someone who does feel the same way they do? but it is a really great poem and really well written
The lie you speak of Daniel is a white one....so called...because it comes from a pure heart. When you are in love..you will know it. from the ache you feel when you are away from her. Well and honestly written. alana
I like how real you are in your poems. You've got a good voice, keep writing!
A great poem. I am sure that seven years later she is not still waiting and I do hope that this dilemma was solved without repercussion. She just had to read the poem. Read mine - Bloom of Youth - Adeline