Tuesday, January 29, 2019

I Left Hurriedly Comments

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I left the new clothes in my hut,
I wore a tattered jeans and a hat,
My first step almost broke my heart,
The oxen of Joe pulled me in a cart.
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Mbusya Wa Mbusya
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Titus senior 22 February 2019

what a nice poem. I like the rhyme and the rhythm created. A simple poem with a strong message.

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Norah 11 February 2019

Amazing poems

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 January 2019

oh we have to leave all and these leaving becomes hurriedly, quietly, finally and remind friendly tears.....//// lovely poem; enjoyed I

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Gajanan Mishra 29 January 2019

Left everything friendly, good write

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