Wednesday, May 7, 2008

I Left A Poem Comments

Rating: 4.7

I left a poem on the side of the highway last night.

With every exhale, words, like litter, escaped me
To flee-float out and about and along,
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Christine Austin Cole
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Aftab Yusuf Shaikh 04 August 2011

sweet words. like ur poem :)

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bob read 06 February 2010

very good clever poem love it10+++++

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Indira Renganathan 06 September 2009

How we get into writing a poem is to leave our words on the highway first....is it? interesting

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Meggie Gultiano 17 July 2009

wow..this is an awesome write..Love it

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Lynn Glover 05 July 2009

A very good write, however, don't put any more of your poems along the highway, someone else may find them. I give you a ten plus also please read and give your opinion of my poem 'The Brightest Star'

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Orange Geometry 21 November 2008

I left a poem on the side of the highway last night - Right where it belonged. some thoughts better be orphaned! !

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Mr Bumbstead 24 October 2008

I gave this poem a whopping 10. Nice job!

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Mark Nwagwu 19 October 2008

you may have dropped a poem on the sidewalk, Chris, but, you know what, it did not lie there for long: the winds of faith blew them my way, and I inhaled them and am filled with poetic proteins. This is 10+, chris

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Roger Cornish 14 September 2008

Just loved this.......

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Kesav Easwaran 31 July 2008

Not a second look? Well...well thought out well written poem 10/10

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 02 June 2008

A good one! Maybe this is what I ought to try, too, for a change: leave a poem out in the night - for a change to my almost daily arranged poetry bouquets sent in the early mornings SMS, which tomorrow definitely will have included this poem now.

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Robert Howard 18 May 2008

Captivating language. I love the earthiness of uniting litter and poetry.

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~ Jon London ~ 16 May 2008

Christine, what a remarkable piece, stunning imagery...i loved the line..With every exhale, words like litter....brilliant! ! ! 10/10 from me. I'll be reading more of your genius writes. best wishes Jon.

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It stared me back with its flaming beady eyes a poem left on the side of highway like a deeply inhaled cigarette butt Very beautiful-

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Mehreen Tahir 12 May 2008

very nicely penned...enjoyed reading it

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