I Learn Comments

I Learn- an exquisite composing. Many thanks madam!

I learn to squeeze the light From the gaps of the clouds A Jubilant poem to rejoice and celebrate life. Thank you for this nice piece.

I learn to squeeze the light From the gaps of the clouds A Jubilant poem to rejoice and celebrate life. Thank you for this nice piece.

Dear Neela, I support your every word and believe that the power of positive thoughts help you shine through life. Just Brilliant! ! ! ! !

emotional poem indeed with best suited words - a nice poem-I- learn to squeeze the light From the gaps of the clouds thank you

I smile to look at life Again in jubilant mood. I laugh, I rise and cross My hurdles, pain, sense Of loss to dance with My own life again. A nice write.

Hi. I read your poem. It starts with a gloomy and melancholic tone and ends with a sort of happiness and joy. But I think the real life is vice versa. We start from happiness and end in sadness. Children are not aware of the torturing facts of life and therefore they are happy. But as we grow old we come to know the pains of life. So, we come to know sadness. Therefore I think your poem is a reversal of reality. That's my interpretation. I'd like to know your comments on my poems too. Thanks