Wednesday, October 5, 2016

I Leapt....[inspired By ' Peeping Tom ' By Valsa George, Who Inspired Akhtar Jawad To Write ' Reply Of Peeping Tom To Valsa George With Due Apology. '; Very Short; Short Enou Comments

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I Leapt....[inspired by ' Peeping Tom ' by Valsa George, who inspired Akhtar Jawad to write ' Reply Of Peeping Tom To Valsa George With Due Apology. '; very SHORT; short enough! ; lust; humour/humor]

With Valsa ever on her guard,
i crept into her flowery yard...,
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Ging Taping 15 October 2016

Maybe the next line you get up it just a nightmare :) ..

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Valsa George 08 October 2016

Hearing a gun blast, I looked Guessed someone or something got hooked My husband said a man was trying to pry And suspected him to be a spy I saw our dog chasing him close by Though limping, the man attempted to fly As he looked back, I recognized him to be Bri In shock and dismay, I heaved a sigh Ha.... ha!

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Akhtar Jawad 06 October 2016

Who can write better than Bti, particularly if it's humor or satire.

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Bri Edwards

Bri Edwards

Earth, i believe
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