Thursday, October 4, 2012

I Lay Under A Tree Comments

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I lay under a tree
And saw the sun, so small
Did the clouds came to see?
Or did the sky began to fall?
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Ketan Hukare
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Eindaray Kyaw 04 October 2012

How amazing this is....I appreciate this poem too much Great idea....Well done! !

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Aung Si 04 October 2012

Good job! Considering your age, your verses are so cool.Keep it up.

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