Thursday, January 26, 2006

I Lay On The Grass Comments

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I lay on the grass beneath a tree,
Beneath a shady tree,
I lay on the grass in the noonday sun
With blue skies over me,
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Philippa Lane 08 February 2006

This is an innocent and open poem, quite simple which adds to its beauty.

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Julia Klimenova 28 January 2006

I most liked the 'grazing in the sky like sheep' line.

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