I Lay In Bed Listening To The Cadence Comments

what a peaceful sleep..thats good, ,

great and lovely one kept it up and thnks for sharing 10++

Beautiful poem well penned. Thank your for sharing.10

such a lovely narrative poem you have shared here....Thanks! ! !

apparantly poetry is hereditery, for you was taught thru his words and you are following the footsteps.

This is another narrative poem from which to learn. Your narrative 'I lay in bed listening to the cadence' about laying in bed listening to cadences of words in stories and poems that makes you think about grandfather and his trips to Africa in effect made you, feel a deep love and appreciation for your home/Indonesia. You are one of the storytellers of your time...keep telling them for they will be passed on to many generations behind. I rate this poem a 10

beautiful write...nice one to read......

good and well penned!

Hearing bedtime stories from grandfather keeps the grandson's mind calm to get a good sleep for the night.

hope tou can do it, it always grea to find a place to feel at home...