Saturday, March 23, 2013

I Lay Awake With You In Mind. Comments

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I lay awake with you in mind.
I cannot clear my head.
Reflect on days we left behind as I lay here alone in bed.
I'm never alone with you in my life.
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Vishal Sharma
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Kavya . 25 March 2013

excellent write....especially the last line liked a lot!

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Unwritten Soul 23 March 2013

Finally PH let me commented and do a favor for your invitation...i like the write, it has a sense of sentimental and soul inside the lines..keep it up ok! _Soul

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Hazel Durham 23 March 2013

A beautiful outpouring of love with such deep emotions expressed vividly! Excellent write!

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Gajanan Mishra 23 March 2013

I watch you grow Vishal, thanks. I like your writings.

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