Monday, March 2, 2020

I Laid Him Down Without Wreath Or Flowers Comments

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I laid him down without wreath or flowers
And gave his body as the currents stream;
I said the words to our God the Father
Reuniting his spirit with the sea.
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Kostas Lagos 03 March 2020

Such a poetic lamentation! Love it!

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Kesav Easwaran 03 March 2020

In-depth thoughts on a funeral. Well brought out. Beautiful poetic expression. Your diction is flowing and attractive. Nice poem Captain Cur! 10+

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Captain Cur 03 March 2020

Kesav, thank you for your comment, it is most kind.

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