Saturday, June 4, 2011

I'L Fly Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wings to fly with the words to describe
i'l fly
knowing that someday u'll shot me down
with your arrow of poison
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jahanvi .......................
fly
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 June 2011

I loved the way you wrote the poem. The poem is extremely rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rated it 10. TFS. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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