Sunday, November 16, 2014

I Know Your Motive Comments

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I know your motive—votive
And your charity-dexterity,
A business seeking profit,
Making people more emotive
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 19 November 2014

Nice inspiring poem scripted with wonderful words.........amazing piece

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Heather Wilkins 17 November 2014

darkness can only be killed by light there is war within you fight fight nicely written

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 17 November 2014

Yes darkness is just like ignorance and this can be killed by only light of knowledge. Excellent understanding with beautiful wording you have arranged each line touches mind. Good learning ALL CAN ACCEPT FROM THIS. Outstanding poem shared.

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Neela Nath Das 17 November 2014

Superb write.Love the lines. Darkness can only be killed by light, There is war within you -fight-fight

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Neela Nath Das 17 November 2014

Superb write.Love the lines. Darkness can only be killed by light, There is war within you -fight-fight

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