Sunday, November 10, 2013

I Know You Like Me Comments

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My point of view
I saw you at the shopping mall
When I saw you my heart speeded up so fast I could fall
Then you smiled and waved at me
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Lauren Green
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Khairul Ahsan 10 November 2013

The number of similar episodes happening around is not few and far between. Thanks for the note which clarifies the two juxtaposed points of view. I enjoyed reading the poem. You have good imagination and you are able to put your thoughts to words pretty well. Keep writing, you'll go a long way! My best wishes to you...

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