My point of view
I saw you at the shopping mall
When I saw you my heart speeded up so fast I could fall
Then you smiled and waved at me
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The number of similar episodes happening around is not few and far between. Thanks for the note which clarifies the two juxtaposed points of view.
I enjoyed reading the poem. You have good imagination and you are able to put your thoughts to words pretty well.
Keep writing, you'll go a long way! My best wishes to you...
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The number of similar episodes happening around is not few and far between. Thanks for the note which clarifies the two juxtaposed points of view. I enjoyed reading the poem. You have good imagination and you are able to put your thoughts to words pretty well. Keep writing, you'll go a long way! My best wishes to you...