I know you as
The winter’s mist
That creeps into my coverlet,
Tenderly shivering my skin,
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superb! interplay and.............. fine words chosen ++++10
oops! ! ! ! ! Seema -sizzling love -intimate kiss foreplay and finally Eros.--hot hot hot! ! ! ! my cuppa is sizzling hot. A+ and 10+++ as always love anju
a poem that makes us travel to new realm of thoughts 10+
good images you draw for your love you personify here...all very nice...pleasing to mind...10
an excellent imaginery work of art, with so much smoothness that melts the reader's heart and it did melted mine....thank you seema ji for sharing such a beautiful thought with so much love and feelings in it 10+++++
words are not enough to describe my feelings about this poem...I loved it. a 10.
Any one who read this poem will melt. 'you' refered in the poem is the most fortunate ever lived in the world as the longing soul is not an ordinary one. mark 10 You may post your image in your portfolio
Are u possessed by great Eros! ! ! ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Soooo arousing. How can I justify with just 10.........Swwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet like honeyh
Simply beautiful.... I know you as The covert memory Materializing in my solitude And sculpting my oblivion With motifs of intimate love. Loved it... Such a deep emotions, so beautifful portrayed with fine words indeed... 10+++