Thursday, October 23, 2008

! ...I Know You As Comments

Rating: 3.8

I know you as
The winter’s mist
That creeps into my coverlet,
Tenderly shivering my skin,
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Seema Aarella
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Dr Kamran Haider 31 October 2008

Simply beautiful.... I know you as The covert memory Materializing in my solitude And sculpting my oblivion With motifs of intimate love. Loved it... Such a deep emotions, so beautifful portrayed with fine words indeed... 10+++

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Sarwar Chowdhury 27 October 2008

superb! interplay and.............. fine words chosen ++++10

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Emerald Gk 26 October 2008

Am refresssssshed! ! ! sweeeeeet

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Anjali Sinha 26 October 2008

oops! ! ! ! ! Seema -sizzling love -intimate kiss foreplay and finally Eros.--hot hot hot! ! ! ! my cuppa is sizzling hot. A+ and 10+++ as always love anju

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Rakhi Jayashankar 26 October 2008

a poem that makes us travel to new realm of thoughts 10+

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Reshma Ramesh 24 October 2008

wow....seema...........smooth operator..........well done

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Kesav Easwaran 24 October 2008

good images you draw for your love you personify here...all very nice...pleasing to mind...10

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Aijaz Asif 23 October 2008

an excellent imaginery work of art, with so much smoothness that melts the reader's heart and it did melted mine....thank you seema ji for sharing such a beautiful thought with so much love and feelings in it 10+++++

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Chitra - 23 October 2008

melting imagery! ..well penned

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C T Heart 23 October 2008

words are not enough to describe my feelings about this poem...I loved it. a 10.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 23 October 2008

Any one who read this poem will melt. 'you' refered in the poem is the most fortunate ever lived in the world as the longing soul is not an ordinary one. mark 10 You may post your image in your portfolio

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 October 2008

Are u possessed by great Eros! ! ! ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Soooo arousing. How can I justify with just 10.........Swwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet like honeyh

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