Wednesday, November 26, 2008

I Know Why Comments

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I know why you do not want me to love you
Because if I do not love you I wouldn't feel much.
Only desire and lust
I woudn't have the right to feel hurt nor betrayed.
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June FeirCruz
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Les Derbyshire 23 April 2009

Once again you have exposed raw emotions with honesty and sensitivity. You invite the reader to share in the pain and the turmoil of feelings that are so eloquently expressed here. Thank you for sharing this June.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 03 December 2008

brilliant exposition love seemingly being shadowed by the ephemeral clouds, yet there is love stashed undeciphered, eloquence flowsby the imagery, well-penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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