Saturday, August 29, 2020

I Know This Night Comments

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I know this night;
it was there last year
when the wind rustled restless leaves.
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Madathil Rajendran Nair
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Bri Edwards 07 November 2020

Though i do not understand what you mean by: " Singing is all that matters" or " Night sings alone alone, alone and alone." ...this poem impresses me enough to send to MyPoemList. favorite lines: " It was some holy cause that some thought served their invented spirits." line 22 " let me sing the pains" I'd end with a comma. bri :) P.S. i like Poet's Note

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2020

That night existed last year and this year too. Rustled restless leaves still witnessed the blowing of wind. You know the same night and you feel the night's dignity. Night sings alone. Singing matters a lot for night as well as for all creatures. We love to hear such singing. Beautiful night motivates mind. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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Savita Tyagi 31 August 2020

No more does it matter which night did we sing for time is a useless aide when it is the heart that pains...... Beautiful poem. Life is full with pain. We just need to collect ourselves and move on. Time may not seem to bring any solace immediately, still time is the biggest healer.

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Kelly Kurt 30 August 2020

Another excellently worded poem.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair

Madathil Rajendran Nair

Bombay, India
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