Sunday, November 9, 2008

I Know That Comments

Rating: 5.0

I know that i love you
I know that you will desert me
I know that print-marks on your neck will vanish.
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Wali Jamali
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Seema Aarella 13 November 2008

lovely indeed....the cosy monsoon of togetherness...the torrential rains of parting...a wonderful picture of love, hope and affirmation given in subtle words. Thanks for sharing.....10 from me.

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Aijaz Asif 12 November 2008

intizaar..........it surely is a marvellous write ma'am you defined beautifully almost the whole story of loved, being apart and yearing for togetherness again or i might have guessed it wrong, if i did please do forgive me with a smile like a 'painter' in my poem...thanks for sharing 10++++ rgds asif

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Indira Babbellapati 11 November 2008

how well you've shown that we humans are an integral and inseperable part of nature

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Subham Dutta 10 November 2008

Dear Xoubiya Jamali, This is a very good poem. Your view and the inner meaning of this poem is very nice.

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Reshma Ramesh 10 November 2008

thoughts about life, love from a broken heart well penned

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Anjali Sinha 10 November 2008

Xoubiya dear--your poem stole my heart away. loved every word of it. so touching. ++++10 as always lovessssssssss anju

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 10 November 2008

very enthralling xoubiya...what i marvelled at was how youve dne the poem up the sadness is somehow enhanced romantically by the allusions to nature and the process of rebirth from dust....healing always comes from nature...thats always been my belief.well done.

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Seema Chowdhury 09 November 2008

sounds like a poem from a heart broken, , , sorry to read it but good composition and words used.

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Omar Ali Sabar 09 November 2008

Wonderful piece xoubiya. His fields shall remain barren till your love shall water them again. But your love shall not be wasted on fools. 10.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 November 2008

' you're the monsoon that swipes my heart away into your dying arms'Beautiful piece my dear friend xoubiya.Shabas! ! !

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