I know that I love you, my dear, yes!
Oh you name! …Lord thee bless!
works with the infirm, comes home late,
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lovely poetry so many comments softly touches all hearts none can lament coming from a doc's pen You may edit All first letters need not be in caps see this and u may also read my MOM SMILES poetry u may like it lovely poet tree r thee
You touched a nerve and a need so deeply that a wide array of readers - including myself - found this to be a wonderful love poem. I like two things especially: the tenderness of the language which maintains a hushed respect for the beloved, never breaking thr romantic mood, and second, that you treat this prospective partner as an individual with the integrity of her personhood. It's the peropwe base for love to flourish. (Mine is comment 35! !)
it's a nice poem with gushing emotions. But The concept of a 'simple girl who needs a protective arm, soft touch, and silent understanding' must change. All over the world, it is now widely understood that if you keep the women subjugated, the whole sociery remains crippled.
This is a very beautiful poem i really enjoyed every bit of it. Thank you
Two thumbs up! Now I know why my poem She is a woman caught your attention.. Because you love and respect women.
Written here love is a many splendid thing wrote from the heart indeed, , , regards
Fantastic poem with many captivating lines adds beauty of love, make it heart warming poem. I liked reading all the lines... A sweet simple girl, inside resides. Needs an arm to hold and hide....loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.
A lovely, heart warming poem...beautifully written! Thank you for your comment, sir.
A very positive poem with good energy. It impressed me so that I translated for you our famous poet Sergey Esenin ... I Hope I have succeeded
Wow, beautiful words of love, thank you Saadat, I really like this poem, it has a very nice rythem :)
finally i did not miss this meaningful poetry, your style is versatile.
a beautiful wish and desire, penned down skillfully with great flow of simplicity, ......10++++ for S
lovely poem saadat, .....got carried with the flow and love for s. ritty
Hey.. that's what I am talking about Sadaat.. This poem rocks big time..! ! ! I mean a lovely poem, ... I was kinda surprised when I saw the title, I mean you don't usually write these types of poems.. But this is very good, This poem shows your versatility as a writer. Nice to read.. Enjoyed this one very much..10++ cheers Shan
Very tender and romantic Saadat. A touching poem indeed. Ruthy
i don't care much (usually) for love poems, but this is a fine one. some of the English perhaps could 'use some tweaking'. beech is a tree. you want beach. ha ha! maybe it was just a typo. i really enjoyed the rhyming. good one. bri :)