I Know Something You Don'T Know.......... Comments

I love recurring line poems. They enable you too keep a theme throughout the poem and amongst broader ideas. I don't tend to use them as every other line, mostly at the head or tail of a stanza. The purpose of poetry being to say something complex, simply. Repetition is at odds with this, but it illuminates your ability to maintain rhyme. Loved the theme. Well done.

exellcent job. very interesting. keep up the good work!

i saw you write this poem :) and its a very good and deep one, i love it.. love youuu babehh! x3, mill