Sunday, May 10, 2020

I Know Now Comments

Rating: 4.8

I Know Now
I wish I knew back when
When I was so young
So gullible
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Lyn Paul
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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 October 2020

A well executed poem. Truly heartwarming and inspiring .....5 stars*****

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Khairul Ahsan 13 May 2020

A sweet and soft poem. Those 55 years are behind you now. Look up to those ahead of you, from now on!

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Anjandev Roy 11 May 2020

Sublime piece......wonderful to read.....anjandev roy.

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Douglas Scotney 10 May 2020

great discovery, Lyn....so many are so Not...!

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Noah body 10 May 2020

Very well said my friend. It took you 55 years but it has taken me over 60

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 May 2020

The childhood age carries many memories and we remember back these time to time. You have remembered back the days with beauty and duty. Yes, yes, you know! You know how your yeas perceive and heart beats. Every one's pain you can feel. But we hope no more pain should acquire hearts. This poem is very brilliantly penned.10

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