Friday, August 10, 2012

I Know Not What Else To Do Comments

Rating: 5.0

Crouching under me like a jackal
Creeping towards me like a crab
You sneak around me like a haunt
You crawl your hands around my waist and grab
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Aria Siren
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Owain Glyn 19 May 2013

A powerful write, full of self realization.

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Ruby Honeytip 28 November 2012

Scary stuff! ! You write really well.

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Tiger Lily Love 20 August 2012

Another excellent write! The concluding lines were especially amazing! Keep up the good work.

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