I know,
Kusum you are not good
The broken melody is frozen in the throat after swallowing the tears
You have filled your hand with the story in the bangle
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Part 3: She withdraws into herself. There is no love lost between them. This state into which a marriage reduces, deteriorates is a serious situation and needs immediate repairs.
Wow! What a poem. The poet repeatedly states, "Kusum, you are not good", to state very forcefully that it is the Narrator who is not good. His acts, his omissions and commissions have caused ‘Kusum' (the word in most Indian languages mean ‘flower') total alienation from him. She withdraws into him
If love cannot reach the desired camp of heart if love cannot earn the depicted being of feelings, then the love feels not good, then the love lives not happy,
I am still grappling with the new features on ph. Sorry for posting the comments in fragments.