Sunday, March 16, 2008

I Know It's My Mind, But I Want Out! Comments

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I am trapped.
In this world.
In this mind.
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bob eichen
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Patti Masterman 21 July 2009

I would choose the artistic, poetic world, myself; but I sure would miss the amenities..electricity, working computers, hot water, medical care...LOL

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Adeline Foster 02 June 2008

Well done. Perplexity or a cry for help? Just reflection or deliberation I suspect. It is well done though. Anthropomorphism has always been and even lends us a bit of fun. Wonder if you might find that same appeal in one of mine called Shell-Shock. Have you been on my website geocities.com/adelinefoster?

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