.i Know I Don'T Deserve It.... Comments

such a poignant poem written vividly and expressive...10

There are some people who take delight in hurting others - but you have a grace and a spirit that can rise above the pain and soar into the light. Believe it.

people are closer than we think they are, but the closer they get, the harder is to see them.. nice write..

In this poem the author described leaving people that are insecure but hurt her the same with the way they behave. These lines are fluent, clever and promising.

very nice words, i like it keep writing

hey there little one i love your siloloquy yeah i dont know why u think that u dont deserve it whatever a nice write my 10 to you love anju

oh don't feel like that i'm ur friend and u can find me always around u just tell me if u wanna talk. don't let ur felling let u down. (u have to smile) always try to smile, , , i learned that from a great friend of mine she learns me how to smile, how to make things better, , how to look at the world in beautiful eyes.....

very nice poem, well written.i love the way u used ur own experience to teach us not to trust all the people.coz if u trust someone completely and give him all u have then he will dump u.

Well, please Don't hate your self Hataw, people do things for their own reasons, I know what you deserve is lots of happiness... Andy

a nice inquisitive thoughts..someday someone will tell you..sometimes its your conscience...well penned..10

i understand what youre feeling. i wonder that too. but im here for you if you wanna talk bout it =) btw great job.