I try to forget
When you are not around I try to live
I know
Soon you are going to leave
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wowwwww! this is so romantic.well we know that love will hurt us, that we can't handle it but we fall in love & why is that? .no one knows. i guess that we become so stupid in love. great work. u deserve more than 10
real everyday honest feeling / so many suffer this experience but could or would not utter a word only deep inside the pain penterates esp. women in the third world. they suffer great coz of social barriers. thanks for expressing this line.
Full of emotion rather sad, but penned so well! Lovely; D
You really know how to weave emotions..good work again.
aww...love can hurt alot...but be glad that you were blessed enough to experience it...very nicely penned down :)
wow! ..great poem, full of emotions and very real........! 10++++++++