Monday, August 13, 2018

I Know A Little Girl Comments

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I know a little girl who is too innocent
In love and trust she is so much ignorant
That she thinks I can do anything for her,
Things that cannot be done by his father
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 August 2018

What a lovely poem, Akhtar Sahab! This is the greatest blessing that a grandfather can give her grand daughter. May both be blessed........10

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Mahtab Bangalee 16 August 2018

little girl or boy little someone Yes innocent and inoffensive everyone takes birth on the features of peace, innocence and inoffensive (and we, the guilty contaminate him/her!) /// superb your writing 10++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 August 2018

Beautifully crafted and well executed write. Loved the picture of this lovely little girl. 10 +++and on to my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 August 2018

This is one of your best poems. It brought tears to my eyes when I read this wonderful write. Very lovingly penned for a granddaughter. Through this poem you have given her an inheritance that no amount of money can buy. Every line of this poem speaks your love for this beautiful girl. I am sure she will become as brilliant as her grandfather for you have raised your hands to the sky for her.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 August 2018

That little girl who is too innocent and ignorent in love and trust is your grand daughter who thinks that her grandfather can do all for her. You have too much love to her as..... May God bring her up to the age of knowledge! I shall love to see her in the uniform of a college, May God bless her ever. A beautiful poem in you pen is dancing Jawadji, thank u both.

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Valsa George 14 August 2018

I am sure she is going to grow to be the pride of her parents and grand parents! A poem overflowing with love and affection for a cute grand daughter!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 August 2018

Akhtar, such a touching poem...10++++

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Khalida Bano Ali 13 August 2018

Euch a lovely poem, I love innosence and ignorance of the little girl.

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