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Well now you make it sound peaceful in that coffin but I hope to wake and be elsewhere. Never the less, you penned a beautiful poem.....

Marvellous expression. An intensive poem I like most. Thanks for sharing.........10

Beautiful emotional thought. loved the last stanza We know we must live for freedom To be you To be me To Survive.

A Heartfelt poem Lyn. Beautiful flow of words from a loving and a caring heart, who want to help all and who wants to share the pains of all. Beautiful flow of words..... I have not written these words for me I have penned these words for I care For those who feel unworthy For those whose life seems unfair It seems that words are just poured out from your loving and caring heart. Loved reading it.

A beautiful poem to give hope to us all to believe in ourselves whatever happens to stand tall and move forward with love, kindness and to be able to forgive! I love this inspirational poem Lyn!

WOW' an amazing penning Lyn! ! You wrote the lines with knowledge and wisdom. Very difficult is this passage but you have to be careful and move ahead. A 10/10.

... a beautiful poem that shows your concern for the people that you love... life has never been easy for anyone... some stands tall even after going through the tough times of their life.. and some falls even from a small problem..its how we take up these challenges that decides our fate ..

Wonderful poem Lyn, full of wisdom and caring. Well done.

life is changing but we must live for freedom. good and true. I like it.