I bought some flowers
Lovely bright
With hue and tint
Blended right
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bought a dinner ‘Candle light’ Sparked talk On winter night Bodies warm Heart but cold But I knew not where love was sold? , , i knes not where love is sold... thoughtful presentation and lovely write.. o like it fopr 10/... read mine dream land.. donot kill me and i sell soul
its a hummmmm and an WOW! :) very clean and significant! 10+++
Seema, this is such an amazing write, familiar images. longing for a soulmate, we wait...an eternal quest. you have brought out the loneliness with such poignancy.the images only add to the pathos of the last lines.10 goes to my fav list Mamta
Bodies warm Heart but cold But I knew not where love was sold? has a kinda thumping voodoo beat to it...draws you in very well written cheers
as much as i know love means only giving away.. selling reflects like a give n take thing.. anyways well penned the piece.. nice flow of words.
love was sold out each time in your heart itself, Seema...beautiful poem...creative thoughts...10
for all i know love can't be bought or sold though it has been made into a commercially viable product...
good write.........just to inform u love is sold everywhere................
Nice reflection on a material world where even love can become a mere commodity. Good lyrics and a strong theme.
ah! ! ! ! ! a marvelous write with excellent repeat to make the readers stay with the poem, ' I knew not where love was sold ' - I wish I did, but me neither, otherwise I would be the most happy person of this universe.....many, many 10'sssssss and definitely added to my most fav's, thanks rgds asif
Fabulous composition...loved the way you have repeated the lines...10+++
Excellent poem with amzing style of presentation. Nice idea is there.10+++
Your style is intriguing yet simple and flowing. I will read more!