Tuesday, June 9, 2009

I Knew Not Where Love Was Sold? Comments

Rating: 3.6

I bought some flowers
Lovely bright
With hue and tint
Blended right
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Seema Aarella
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 18 October 2009

Your style is intriguing yet simple and flowing. I will read more!

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bought a dinner ‘Candle light’ Sparked talk On winter night Bodies warm Heart but cold But I knew not where love was sold? , , i knes not where love is sold... thoughtful presentation and lovely write.. o like it fopr 10/... read mine dream land.. donot kill me and i sell soul

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Anjali Sinha 19 June 2009

well youve sung a nice song there good write

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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 June 2009

its a hummmmm and an WOW! :) very clean and significant! 10+++

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Mamta Agarwal 15 June 2009

Seema, this is such an amazing write, familiar images. longing for a soulmate, we wait...an eternal quest. you have brought out the loneliness with such poignancy.the images only add to the pathos of the last lines.10 goes to my fav list Mamta

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Saadat Tahir 13 June 2009

Bodies warm Heart but cold But I knew not where love was sold? has a kinda thumping voodoo beat to it...draws you in very well written cheers

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Priyanka Bhowmick 12 June 2009

as much as i know love means only giving away.. selling reflects like a give n take thing.. anyways well penned the piece.. nice flow of words.

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Kesav Easwaran 12 June 2009

love was sold out each time in your heart itself, Seema...beautiful poem...creative thoughts...10

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Indira Babbellapati 11 June 2009

for all i know love can't be bought or sold though it has been made into a commercially viable product...

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 11 June 2009

an excellent message strikingly given. shan 10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 10 June 2009

good write.........just to inform u love is sold everywhere................

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Reshma Ramesh 10 June 2009

aawe.......such a nice sing song like poem.....well penned

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Aziz Alkaabi 10 June 2009

Nice reflection on a material world where even love can become a mere commodity. Good lyrics and a strong theme.

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Aijaz Asif 10 June 2009

ah! ! ! ! ! a marvelous write with excellent repeat to make the readers stay with the poem, ' I knew not where love was sold ' - I wish I did, but me neither, otherwise I would be the most happy person of this universe.....many, many 10'sssssss and definitely added to my most fav's, thanks rgds asif

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Catrina Heart 09 June 2009

Fabulous composition...loved the way you have repeated the lines...10+++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 June 2009

Excellent poem with amzing style of presentation. Nice idea is there.10+++

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Seema Aarella

Seema Aarella

KGF, India
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