Saturday, May 23, 2015

I Knew A Girl Once Comments

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I knew a girl once
A perfect girl
And I know there's no such thing
But she was perfect to me
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Jeremiah Crane
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T.Rajesh 07 February 2018

Loved the poem and its concluding line packs a poetic punch. To quote: 'But she was never a fish.'

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Chinedu Dike 06 February 2018

Rich flow of thoughts with captivating images. Beautiful love poem, lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing.

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Grace Burke 23 May 2015

I loved your poem very well written

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Patrick Currie 24 May 2015

Thank you Grace. Thanks for reading.

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