Monday, August 11, 2008

I Kissed You In A Dream Comments

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I kissed you in a dream last night.
The world stopped turning as our lips lingered,
the universe held in my arms burning.
Through closed eyes a sky full of stars
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Bruce Schwab
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Practicing Poetess 30 March 2017

Bruce, this is AMAZING! You keep up this kind of work, and you'll be at a Level 2 in no time flat! (From a gal who eats, breathes, and sleeps love, and who knows a good love poem when she sees one!)

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Stacey Watts 11 August 2008

Such a beautiful poem. I love the way your descriptions are so vivid.

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Bruce Schwab

Bruce Schwab

Ogden, UT
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