I Kissed Him Like An Octopus Comments

The title of your poem is really eye catching, though the text doesn't contain anything as deep as the title suggests. Some descriptions are very good, like: 'your lips sweetest hydromel i have drunk - ever.'... Lips compared to hydromel, a drink, is fantastic. 'Your lips softest plush thats why i have this crush on you. All summer long. Shame we do not go along..'...Lips again, as the reason for the crush, is a wonderful thought. 'finally you should learn to love someone else more than yourself.' ... This is really an anti climax! Well written, over all.