I Kept On Walking Comments

Very Nice poem. Even though your poem is very sad. But I really like your way of writing.

My aims were like a beautiful sky Its zenith required more than a try Ordeal ahead was free from lies Had to finish before this soul dies My honest deeds were doing the talking Without a hush, i kept on walking My life became totally shallow Dragging into deathly hallows Then the god brightened the day When my baby had the say Negating being its ultimate prey I started the journey afresh Keeping all my aims suppressed I kept on walking Till the heavens came knocking the truths set the tone of the poem which have been furnished with ease and the grief behind the dream and aim have worked out so perfect........right from your heart! !

up in the third paragraph i reccomend you switch the wording to: beaming despite my breaking bones. just a little suggestion (: i enjoyed the journey theme, it's a good message, never let your head down.

striking and powerful and a rhythmic song...much to provide...loved ur creation

The will power in your body protect your soul to be durable in any condition, the sensation of self embrace even hurt or tormented bold but you still standing to keep walking....so never stop in any reason for your life move smoothly in any challenge in future. Beautiful write Sharad! ! ! ! _Unwritten Soul

Awesome! It really captivated me, nd am inspired. Keep on walking dude and never stop believing!

Excellent description...

the refrain of the poem is awesome, it rhymes, it conveys a message, it adorns the poem. and the message you've conveyed, i think is inspiring too. the poem gives a hint of self confidence while making a line with over confidence. you kept on walking, i say, you must keep on writing.

The poem is essentially very good - there are two words I would change, however, these being `gawking` and `nerds.` Perhaps instead of `gawking` you could replace this with `fixing`, and `nerds` maybe could be replaed with `herds` if you want to maintain the rhyme.

A great poem, like it.

a very nice expression of what happens to a person.. amazing work.... :)

Life is a journey.woven with delight and woe.Whatever comes on our way we have to pass it. This is the philosophy of life. Very nice write! Good diction. Poetic vision? Aha!

solid piece of writing man. true as can be. from the heart.

A very nice poem. The thought flows softly like an unimpeded free flowing stream.

Classic piece of poetry. Loved it. :)

amazing poem......really a great work

amazing poem......really a great work

a true story of a common man

nice poem, , , i really like the way of writing this poem... :))

Good read, keep up the writing, you have a knack for it :)