Thursday, September 26, 2013

I Kept Living In Darkness Comments

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I kept
Living in darkness
With pessimism
In my
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Dr.Rajendra Tela,Nirantar
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Roseann Shawiak 19 October 2013

No one can take you out of darkness, it is your choice to do it or not. There seems to be a subtle under tone of blame, for someone failing to understand. Just seemed to come across to me that way. Definitely liked this poem though. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Living in darkness or in light It will always be our conscious choice For this life to make it dull or bright All we have to do is to listen to the inner voice.... (Good poem - keep writing)

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Marvin Brato 07 October 2013

Meaningful write...many can relate!

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