Saturday, September 30, 2006

I Keep Thinkin' Comments

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I keep thinkin'..........
When did you decide you were better than me?
When did you ever try to understand the real me?
Did you ever really hear what I was saying to you?
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Linda Ori
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Not a member No 4 03 February 2007

You've got to keep thinkin'! . First rate analytical content, and good progression built into the structure, leading us through the poet's mind as it traverses the possibilities and reaches conclusions. Very solid writing Linda, and a rock solid attitude on display! xx jim

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Catastrophe King 06 October 2006

LINDA... This one is a beauty... I loved the boldness and the challenge tone! Its such a smooth piece to read through and the theme is well narrated through your talent.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 30 September 2006

LISTEN.MIDNIGHT...If ya' got something to say....speak up for god's sake! Love it M.B.>>>Emotional conviction, in it's most Absolute form...You have the rare gift of conveying commanding, yet controlled Emotion....a Superb Penning! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR

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Brian Dorn 30 September 2006

I keep thinkin' great poem, Linda! ! Brian

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Rusty Daily 30 September 2006

Pretty good life lesson here Linda. Choice. Lead a horse to water and all that. Don't bend over backward too much though.

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