Monday, January 12, 2009

I Keep Telling Myself Comments

Rating: 5.0

I keep telling myself
That things will change
New ideas will rise for us to rearrange
Chaos will bury itself in red tape
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Alfred Ramos
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Robert Davis 25 January 2009

I think we all keep telling ourselves, i enjoyed the poem, a nice read, very well written.

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Anita Atina 17 January 2009

This is a lovely poem Al, and such an important message. I'll keep telling myself too! :)

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Fiona Davidson 15 January 2009

Good strong message here...well written...thank you....Fi

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Ency Bearis 12 January 2009

nice introspections..well narrated and written well/rhymes...10

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Jim Norausky 12 January 2009

Alfred, Flows nicely. I like it. Jim

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