I Keep Going Comments
I keep going
even when there are no rainbows in the sky
I keep going even when I ask myself why
clouds always covering my sunny day
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hey, Silly, why not days with haze? ;) I'll lift your most nasty, horrible burden, as I lift each morn' my morning curtain. And thence your days shall be so sunny. Please blow your nose, as now it's runny! to MyPoemList. bri :)
Bri you certainly are unique! I appreciate your comment it brought a smile to my face. And yes I know what you mean about the haze. That's next week!
Yes days with haze! lol That is what red wine does for me! Clouds don't stay for long!
I do hope better days will come, though sometimes it is hard to see that day. A 10.
Life is full of sorrows but it's also sweet that makes us continue fighting. Great poem!
Keep on going ahead with positive perspectives and motivate life for greater success. Hurting will no more last for and life will bloom soon. An interesting poem is beautifully penned...10
I keep going hoping life will lift its burdens....I find a great sense of optimism in this part of your expression! Beautifully penned....10
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7/22/2025 10:24:13 PM # 1.0.0
Applause! ! Your words are so clear of your point across.