Saturday, October 31, 2020

I Just Wish Comments

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I wish I was normal
I wish I was formal
I wish I was like my brothers
I wish I was like my father, and his fathers father
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Chinedu Dike 11 November 2020

Really a poignant bit of verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions.

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Paul T Burne 31 October 2020

A sad poem and I hope its not how you feel every day. The earth is much stronger than we like to

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Turuva Keli 05 November 2020

hi paul, thanks for the kind concern and no i don't feel this everyday. Just sometimes.

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Turuva Keli

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