Monday, July 20, 2015

I Just Want You To Know That I Miss You So Much, Comments

Rating: 4.5

As I contemplate the stars in this velvet sky,
Another tear rolls from my tear filled eye,
Reflecting the misery of my pain filled life,
So hurtful, so sad like a stab from a knife,
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Daya Nandan
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Chinedu Dike 30 July 2015

Beautiful love poem, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart with conviction. A good depiction of distress and anxiety in bliss of love. A lovely poem with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Daya.

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