Wednesday, November 17, 2021

I Just Want To Swim Comments

Rating: 5.0

She had that
octopus smile,
always reaching for
something.
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Thomas Case
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Maria Mitea 24 November 2021

Brilliant work, Thomas!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 November 2021

A beautiful poem full of metaphors and compelling images. Masterfully woven.

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David Wood 17 November 2021

I was nearly a meal for a shark once, it still raises the hair at the back of my neck, yes it's their ocean we swim in it at our peril. A good 5*

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Thomas Case

Thomas Case

Oxnard, California
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