I Just Want To Say... Comments

I concur with Karin, its Brilliant! ! ! and its life. Thank you for sharing of your talent, will be back :)

such a cute piece....lovely 1.

You say a lot with a few words. How much is lost in times of anger, but making up can be very satisfying. Hope you get your chance. Well done.

It is outstanding I love it. Lol it has very good humor and a lot of truths. I love the vivid arguement great discriptions!

Oh! God Charlie this is brilliant. It gave me a great chuckle and you explained the argument vividly admitting your love even so. Loved the ending too! 10 Karin Anderson

What a great poem - tells a good story, and balances high emotion with humour. I'm giving this a 10 and adding it to my favourites.

'because when you stormed out with murder in your eyes' my favorite bit. really like this poem and your others <3 10

This is cute, warm, and humorous but sweet in one small but powerfull package penned with many different emotions that are triggered with anger/ love........ Very nicely composed..... Bonnie

ouch..lolz..does your thumb hurts? ...again again again, , , , i lav this piece grace

well balanced.....sad with a hint of laughter: D well done love and life hurt: P 10++

OH yes LOVE hurts and gives a real pain in the.....a ten from me.

this is good..the end made me laugh..im still laughin its just so true

This.... I like. It is a clever perspective to a petty arguement in which love prevails. I also like the humour. It is subtle and blends well to provide a hard and soft background. Very Enyable read Best Steve

i like this poem..it let me laugh..very well done 10++++