Who am I?
Am I just a flesh of despair on a plate of hopefulness?
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your call! decide to be vertigonous at edge or immerse completely to an awakening san slumber! !
nice rational poem, deep ideas well embedded to convey the message....10++++++
nice rational poem, deep ideas well embedded to convey the message....10++++++
good and inspiring question and its indirect explanations..reall a good piece.. you added here..yes you are you.. means a good writer and thoughful poet.. and maybe more then that..10/10
Who are you, ? Well let me tell you. You are everything I ever look for in a Poet. I shall take such pleasure in reading more of your work Again...and Again. I beg you read a couple of mine and tell me your Critic try ' Who in a Million Loves Me' and 'Remember You Are Special' and note them as My tribute to Your own Work.And Thank you for your comment on my Bridges. Kind regards. Philip
An excellent poem in which the writer opens herself to the World with her frustrations and anguish fully laid out raw and bare, and yet whilst in this tormented state still reprimands herself for feelings of selfishness in her quest for the truth. This is a brave and honest piece which tells much of the writer. The ability to create such a connection with the reader deserves a 10.
Who am I? Good question to ask... But the answers lies within you in your deep thoughts. Beautiful poem. Well penned Enjoyed reading it
Am I just a disgraceful heart that tries to beat for all the people but ends beating only for itself? Or just an embodiment of perplexity in this remorseless universe? Who am I? I just want to know............. u have answer within u.. i msut geuss ur self wht you are. if u can't get answerthensubmit to HIM for an easy answer..you will defintiely have nswer.seek his blessings....very good poem with celar message...10 read... i am disgrace...what o dooing onearth? ? //humble submission
Nice questions Munia but who's to give you the answers? The only place you can seek these answers lies deep within, a beautiful write though!
True to my words of last October...I am drawn to read again 'I just want to know' Well I am going to bet with you you know by now our dear Munia. From all the encouraging comments that you receive, that I am not a lone voice.