Monday, January 11, 2010

I Just Want Peace Comments

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I just want peace
All i want is peace
Why i can't have peace
everywhere i go is nothing
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Angel Wade
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Robinson Helela 06 December 2011

u are cul ade.u jst have to put in enough imagery in ur poems to gv them more power they deserve.i blv there is sth in u that cn mk u write better poems.check my poems soon and see the imagery am talking about.tchao!

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