I Just Wanna Know Comments

LoVe is an enigma you must seek it for lifetime even if you find it you must decode it... sooooooo DeeP is the LoVe...

I jus wanna know u love me or not....

TRUE EMOTIONS... WRITTEN WELL...

I hope my criticize won't dishearten you rather it will inspire to improve your craft of writing. The in before everywhere is an excess. The emotions you expressed are impractical. And your quest for the perfect one for you will probably go in vain; this pessimistic approach to life is utterly negative. Try to revise your poems in order to offer the best possible output for the readers..

Carry on brother. Nice to read.

I see so much of me in what you write. I'm not asking you to read my poetry but take the time to objectively read your own. When you rise above what you're writing about, you'll realize your own immeasurable worth and then all will be well. Keep smiling, Little Sunshine! Be Well, Nate

Hmm, seems unfinished to me. Still a good base if you decide to expand this work.