I might have to break every finger in each hand
to keep from reaching out to you
i walked away but i didn't mean it
i let you go but i didn't want to
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The repetition in this imaginative piece makes it read like a song. It's a mature style of writing and I enjoy it. Touching, too. t x
I have to agree with TMcH about the poem reading like song lyrics because of the repetition. Have you tried to set it to music, or have someone else write music to it? Beautiful job.